
Next NETWO meeting is Volume 23, Issue 5
Thursday,
May 14, at 5:30 p.m. May 2009
Western Sizzlin, Mt.
Pleasant
GUEST SPEAKER
The May meeting of NETWO will be a special treat for those attending. Dr. Jim Robertson, a former professor at NTCC will be our guest speaker. Dr. Robertson will have his recently completed autobiography with him and will talk about the accident that blinded him at the age of twenty, the frustration and rehabilitation that led to his recovery, and how he completed his doctorate in political science. Jim has enjoyed many accomplishments over the years. He served a term in the Mississippi legislature, taught political science and geography in two different colleges, participated in a number of civic organizations, and served on the Mt. Pleasant Habitat for Humanity board and as Executive Director of the Habitat for Humanity organization in Hattiesburg, Mississippi. Jim’s first book, Jimmy’s Hope, was published in 2004. The sequel to that book will probably be published later this year.
Jim Robertson is a special person. You will not want to miss meeting him and hearing his story. ?
NETWO 2009 Spring Conference
Reported by Joy M. Chitsey
The Northeast Texas Writers’ Organization held their 23rd annual writers’ conference at Camp Shiloh outside Pittsburg, Texas April 24th and 25th. The conference was jam-packed with excellent writing information to encourage, to help polish current writing projects, and to direct writers where and how to get published.
The conference began Friday with author
Lori Wilde presenting an optional workshop entitled “Creating Compelling Characters.”
A reception was held Friday evening enabling members of NETWO an
opportunity to meet the faculty for the conference on Saturday.

Photos by Bryan Freeman
The food was great. Afterwards, those who were spending the night were invited to participate in a Progressive Writing activity where word prompts were introduced every two minutes which were then woven into the stories that were being written by the various groups.
Saturday started off with a breakfast for the campers and the early birds while regis-tration and check-in were taking place. Joanna Stampfel-Volpe, a New York agent with the Nancy Coffey Literary and Media Representatives, discussed how to alleviate some of the pain associated with writing “The Dreaded Synopsis.” Joanna shared the difference between a query letter and the synopsis. She stressed the importance of weeding out the unnecessary characters and then sticking with the story line.
Charles Sasser, an author of more than fifty published books shared his many journeys and amazing list of jobs which he’s held during his lifetime. He spoke on “Participation: Key to Writing Success.” He encouraged writers to constantly take pictures, set goals and write every day.
Terry Burns, author and agent, was scheduled to speak but was unable to attend due to a recent injury. Dan Case, owner of AWOC.COM Publishing out of Denton, Texas filled Mr. Burns’ spot. He talked about the “Ten Easiest Ways to Get Published,” which actually was not ten. Some of the few steps were as follows: learn your craft; read from the King James Bible Version every day because it is written in proper English; study grammar, and write a great beginning to anything that you write.
After lunch, Melissa Frain, a New York editor, who has worked with a wide variety of projects and authors, spoke on “How to Make an Editor Love Your Book.”
A. Lee Martinez, author of five fantasy/scifi novels entertained the participants with a humorous presentation on “How to Create a Real Fantasy World.”
After each speaker shared individually, they continued to inform the audience with a panel discussion answering questions from those present.

Photo by Bryan Freeman
2009 Conference Faculty:
(l to r) Lee
Martinez, Melissa Frain, Dan Case,
Charles (Chuck) Sasser, Joanna Stampfel, and Lori Wilde
A Post-Conference dinner was held where winners of the Short Story Contest were announced along with presentation of the awards to individual members of NETWO for their constant devotion and promotion of the organization to the community of writers.
Ted Rankin was the recipient of the President’s Award. Ted is presently serving his second term as
president.
The Spirit Award was bestowed upon
Galand Nuchols.
Georgia Henson and
Jean Pamplin
were honored with Lifetime Member-ships for their many years
of outstanding service to NETWO.
Gay Ingram
received the Early Bird Award. For the past three
years, Gay has been the first to register for the conference.
The Pen in Hand award was given to Floy Smith for putting out the newsletter.
(Let me insert: I appreciate this award, but I would like to express my appreciation to all the NETWO members who provide the input for the newsletter. It would be impossible without you. - Floy) ?SHORT STORY CONTEST WINNERS
1st place winner ($150.00) Denise Weeks for her story titled “Jeep, Buddy, and Pierce”
2nd place winner ($100.00) Susan A. Royal
for her story titled “Lost Souls”
(Read it below)
3rd place winner ($50.00) Ginnie Bivona
for her story “The Peddlar Man”
4th place winner ($25.00) Galand Nuchols
for her story titled “The Chip Made the Difference”
Honorable Mention –Judith A. Gallardo
for her story titled “Seascape”
Honorable Mention- Brandon Jones
for his story titled “The Date”
Honorable Mention – Denise
G. Weeks
for her story titled “The Truth About Hansel and Gretel (Who Now Goes by ‘Heather’) and That Crazy Witch: A Fable Retold in Modern Bop Talk”
Honorable Mention-
Denise G. Weeks
for her story “Home Church”
Some fifty-plus stories were judged and our appreciation is extended to all those who entered. Special thanks to David and Nita Allen for all their efforts in shepherding this project. ?
CORRECTION The Profile of Jean Pamplin in the April With Pen in Hand stated that Jean was
valedictorian of her class at NTCC.
She was actually valedictorian of her high school class. We will try again when she finishes at
NTCC!
Little Journeys, Jory Sherman’s latest book, features an introduction by Richard S. Wheeler and cover art by his son,
Jory V. Sherman.
An autographed copy may be ordered from Jory ($12.95 includes shipping and handling)
at Jory Sherman
38 Pvt. Rd. 52041
Pittsburg, TX 75686
SECOND PLACE WINNER – 2009 SHORT STORY CONTEST

LOST SOULS
By Susan Royal
“Damn it, Ricky. We should have gotten gas before we left town on this wild goose chase of yours.” Eli exploded at his cousin when the engine
sputtered and died. He steered the truck
over on the shoulder of the oil top road.
“That’s impossible. Before we left town I checked, and we had
more than half a tank,” the chubby-faced teenager in the passenger seat
protested.
“Yeah, and when I said the gas gauge
didn’t always work, you said, that’s ok.
It’s not very far. Remember?” Eli pounded the steering wheel in
frustration. He should have known. With Ricky, something like this always
happened.
Out past curfew, out of gas, and stuck on
a deserted road. Eli didn’t even want to
think about how Grandpa would react.
He’d handed Eli the keys to the farm truck less than a week ago. At the time, Eli couldn’t believe his
luck. Now, he couldn’t believe he’d let
Ricky talk him into this in the first place.
“I forget how dark it gets on these back
roads after the sun goes down.” Ricky
peered out at dense woods crowding both sides of the narrow road. Spanish moss hanging from gnarled branches
danced in the wind, while inky, black darkness pooled beneath the trees. Thin threads of clouds moved to cover the
October moon, casting eerie shadows below.
“Not to mention creepy.”
“Get used to it. If someone doesn’t drive by, we’ll be here
until tomorrow.”
“Jeez, don’t blame me. I just wanted to see it for myself.” A girl in their Senior English class had told
Ricky about an abandoned church called Lost Souls, located in the middle of an
old pecan grove. Inside, inverted
crosses covered the walls, animal bones littered the floor, and dried blood
stained the sides of the pulpit. Or, so she said. Ricky talked about nothing else, until Eli
finally gave in, and promised they’d drive out to see it.
“Are you sure she wasn’t pulling your
leg?” Eli asked for the third time.
“She swore it was true.”
“Sure she did.”
Ricky knew Eli meant he was being gullible
again. But, instead of arguing, he
changed the subject. “We passed a house
less than a mile back. We can use their
telephone to call for help.”
“If they even have one.”
“Well, maybe they’ll give us some gas.” Eli
turned and frowned at Ricky.
“Wait a minute. I don’t remember passing any house.”
“I saw a light. There’s got to be a house. C’mon.
We can’t stay here all night.”
Ricky got out of the truck.
Reluctantly, Eli followed. Hands
jammed down in the pockets of his jean jacket, he shivered. It’s getting cold. He listened to the wind sigh, and watched dry
leaves blowing across the road like an army of advancing spiders. Everything does look creepy.
They started down the road. Ricky had to jog to keep up with the taller
boy, his mouth moving as fast as his legs.
“I asked Grandma about Lost Souls, and she
said it’s been boarded up as long as she can remember. She told me about a crazy, old preacher who
used rattlesnakes to put the fear of God into the brethren. He was a faith healer, so he thought he
couldn’t be hurt. Something happened to
him, and after a while, the congregation died out until no one was left.” Eli listened to the wind making a low,
keening sound even less appealing than Ricky’s voice.
“See, I told you. Look up there.” Ricky pointed. A bright light shone through the tops of
tall, ancient trees.
Below, a dented mailbox marked “Cain”
leaned tiredly against a fence post. A
rusty cattle guard stretched between two gateposts. Following the road that curved back into the
trees, they walked so close their elbows almost touched. Ricky had finally
stopped talking, so all Eli heard was the wind.
They found a frame house perched crookedly
on pier and beam. Held together by
little more than peeling paint and scraggly vines, it sagged beyond repair from
years of neglect. Not far away, a barn
listed to one side. No light burned in
the house, and no animals sheltered in the barn.
“Crap, everything looks deserted. That’s funny.
Why would anyone pay to have a security light if they…” Eli didn’t wait to hear the end of Ricky’s
sentence. He saw a rusty tractor parked
next to the barn, and ran to see if it had any gas.
“God almighty, what’s that smell?” Ricky
yelled making Eli jump like he was stung.
Making choking noises, he pulled the neck of his tee shirt up over his
nose.
“Stop bellowing, will you? I can hear you just fine.”
“I can’t breathe. It’s awful.
Worse than the possum that crawled under Grandma’s house and died.” Eli thought Ricky was exaggerating until he
took a breath and almost gagged.
“It smells like it’s been dead a long,
long time.”
“What could it—“ A
sudden noise interrupted, vibrating the night air. This time they both jumped.
“Shit! What was that?” Ricky’s voice
dropped to a hoarse whisper.
“Maybe something blew off the house.” As
if in protest, the rickety old structure creaked and groaned every time the
wind blew.
“Maybe we should just start walking back
to town.”
“Are you crazy?” Eli had only agreed to
come this far because Ricky begged. He
would rather have stayed with the truck.
Feeling around in the dark for the gas
cap, he worked it loose. When he smelled
fumes, he told Ricky, “Look for a hose and a container, so we can siphon some
gas. Then, cross your fingers and hope
there’s enough to do some good.”
“Maybe this ain’t such a good idea, after
all.”
“What are you saying?”
“Well, whoever owns this place might not
like us helping ourselves.”
“Do you see anyone around to ask?” His last shred of patience gone, Eli got in
Ricky’s face. “Tell you what. While I’m
working on this, why don’t you go on up to the house, and see if you can find
someone?” He watched Ricky turn pale.
“B…but,
what’ll I do if they come to the door with a gun?”
“If that happens, you better talk quick in
case they decide to shoot.” Ricky
hesitated, but Eli ignored him, and bent down to dig through an old wooden
crate beneath the tractor. So he turned and walked away.
He’s scared, Eli thought. It serves him right. If it weren’t for him, we wouldn’t be
here. We shouldn’t be here, either. I don’t like this place.
At the bottom of the crate, his fingers
brushed against something. They closed
around a length of rubber tubing. If it
wasn’t rotten, it might work. Looking
further, he uncovered a gallon jug.
Pushing one end of the tubing inside and the other in the gas tank, he
held this breath. Soon liquid began to spill
into the container.
Ricky reached the bottom of the tilting
porch steps. Standing there, he ran a
hand over the top of his head, and back again.
Finally, he went up and tapped on the door.
“Hello?
Is anybody home?” He sounded like
a nervous door-to-door salesman, reluctant to give up his last chance of the
day to make a transaction. When no one
responded, he cleared his throat, and knocked a little louder.
“My cousin and I ran out of gas down the
road.” He waited for an answer, but none
came. “We just wanted to see if we could
get some from your tractor.” Ricky
looked back at the tractor where Eli worked and shrugged, before reaching for
the handle on the tattered screen door.
He edged inside. “We’ll pay for it, honest. We just need enough to get back to the
highway. We-“
Ricky’s voice stopped
mid-sentence. It went up an octave,
ending in a squeak like a rusty hinge.
“What the hell?” Frowning, Eli could see
Ricky just standing on the porch.
“I’ve had just about enough of you. If
you’re trying to be funny, you’re not even close.” The stream of gas had slowed to a trickle, so
he yanked the tubing loose. When he held
the jug up to the light, he could see it was half full. Fuming, he capped it and went to wring
Ricky’s neck, but when he got close enough to see his fear, he forgot his
anger. He threw open the door with such
force it almost came off its hinges, and crossed the threshold. The smell of decay was even more intense than
it had been by the barn.
“What’s the matter with you?” Ricky raised
his hand and pointed, eyes riveted on something on the other side of the
porch. Eli blinked. His eyes slowly
adjusted, and he knew they weren’t alone.
A few feet away, a figure sat motionless in the dark. Eli saw a small, glowing dot hovered in the
air. He
must have been sitting here all along, watching everything we did.
Without speaking, the figure raised the
cigarette to invisible lips, inhaled and exhaled acrid smoke, making Eli’s eyes
water. Why doesn’t he say something? His heart hammered in his chest, but
everything else was silent. Even the
wind had stopped. He wanted to move, but
he couldn’t make his legs work. In the
back of his mind, he saw himself running in place, like some cartoon
character. Beside him, Ricky made a
strangled noise, and grabbed his arm in a vise-like grip.
“Eli, d-do you see someone sitting over
there in a rocking chair? Please, tell
me I’m just seeing things.”
The figure began to move wildly back and
forth in the chair, slamming the rockers against the floor with loud, explosive
thuds. It rocked with such violence Eli
was sure it would overturn. Then, it
stopped.
Ricky’s grip tightened and pain shot up
Eli’s arm. The cigarette flew off the
porch in a shower of sparks. The figure
turned to look at them with glowing eyes, and stood until it towered over both
the boys.
It was the catalyst they needed. Bursting through the door at the same time,
they leapt off the steps. They fled down
the road, over the cattle guard and past the mailbox. They ran until they were out of breath and
stumbling, not stopping until they reached the truck.
Once there, they leaned against the
tailgate, gasping for breath. Eli looked
down at the container he carried. With
shaking hands, he took it over to the gas tank, and emptied nearly all its
contents.
“Get in the truck,” he ordered. He raised the hood, and poured the rest in
the carburetor, just like Grandpa taught him.
He slid behind the wheel, pumped the gas pedal to prime it, and turned
the ignition. Nothing happened.
“Please, God,” he prayed. He tried again. The old truck coughed and spluttered, but the
engine turned over. He put the truck in
gear, made a u-turn and headed the other way as fast as he could.
Driving past the dirt road that led to the
farmhouse, he half-expected to see a mad man in the road with a gun, but no one
waited. In fact, he almost missed the
turn, because it was so dark. No
security light burned through the trees to beckon them.
“Eli,” Ricky finally managed to
croak. “What was that?” Not bothering to answer, he ground the gears,
shifted, and sped up. They made it back
to the highway before the truck ran out of gas again, and before long someone
happened by with enough extra gas to get them home. Grandpa met them at the door.
“It’s my fault, Uncle Sam,” Ricky blurted
before Eli had a chance to speak. “It
was my idea to go see Lost Souls. Eli
didn’t want to go. I talked him into it,
and we ran out of gas.”
“You boys are lucky you aren’t still
sitting out there. There’s nothing out
that road. How’d you get back?”
“I made Eli leave the truck and walk down
to a farmhouse off the road to see if we could borrow some.”
“That can’t be,” Sam Jenkins said. “No one lives in that house, not since…”
“We saw someone, Grandpa,” Eli
interrupted. “He was sitting on the
porch, smoking.”
“Impossible. No one’s lived there for a long time. People say it’s haunted, but people talk like
that because of what happened.”
“What did happen, Uncle Sam?”
“Years ago, a family by the name of Cain
lived at the farm. They didn’t have much
to do with anyone, just kept to themselves. Mr. Cain came to town for supplies one day,
and when someone asked about his family, he said they were all bad sick.”
“So, some of the ladies from town took a
notion to help. They took food out to
the farm, but he sent them away. Not
willing to accept defeat, they came back with the sheriff to persuade Mr. Cain
to accept their Christian charity.” Grandpa shook his head. “He finally gave in.”
“When the ladies stepped inside the door,
they smelled something dreadful. They
all came back outside with their lace handkerchiefs covering their noses, and
told the sheriff something must be terribly wrong. When he searched the house, he found Mr.
Cain’s wife and children in their beds, and they’d been dead for a long time.”
“Mr. Cain was a preacher at Lost Souls church,
and he believed in faith healing. He had
let his family suffer, thinking he could pray over them and make them
well. Didn’t really matter what he
believed. In the end, he killed them
just the same. Not long after, a
passerby found him sitting on the porch in his rocking chair, dead. No telling how long he’d been there.”
Later Eli lay in bed, thinking about what
happened. No matter what Grandpa said,
they’d seen someone, and Eli knew it was the preacher. It could be he lingered, hoping his family
would join him. Or, maybe he wanted
their forgiveness for what he’d done.
But, Eli was sure of one thing.
After all these years, Mr. Cain was still sitting in his rocking chair
on the porch, waiting. ?
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MEMORIAL
DAY
By Bryan Freeman
On the twenty-fifth of this month,
Memorial Day, we will honor the courageous soldiers that have fallen in battle
and the ones that have fought beside them.
But for those of us who have never been in a war, we only remember them
this one day a year.
Those who have fought in a war have
Memorial Day every day. The families
that have lost loved ones—fathers, mothers, sisters, and brothers—have Memorial
Day every day, and those civilians who were caught in the hell of two warring
armies and suffered the ravages of war have Memorial Day every day.
Hopefully, in the future, war will become
obsolete, and they will not have fought and died in vain.
This is a poem I wrote.
War is hell they say
For sure it is not our forte
War is hell and it is mean
Ask any civilian caught in between. I have an idea, but only so, of what is done.
I know, I’m married to one.
War is hell and it is mean
Ask any soldier when he dreams.
I have known men from WWI and 1, Korea and Nam
And at night before they went to sleep, they would shake my
Hand and touch my arm.
And during the night, I would hear their screams.
During the night when they would….dream.
War is hell and it is mean.
Ask any soldier when he dreams.
God bless them all.